My name is Giselle Mara Teixeira Reis, I´m 23 years old and I´m an undergraduate student of Law school at FUMEC, and I also study Languages at UFMG, majoring in English teaching. Well, it´s not easy to study these couses together, but I like it. It gets crazy sometimes when the tests time comes, so I have to skip a law class to study for a english test or the other way around. I´m always running but im always late still. The down side to that all is that I´m still not sure of what I want to do professionally. One thing i know for sure is that i don´t want to be a lawyer! I´ve worked as an english teacher for a while, in Cultura Inglesa, and I loved it! Unfortunatly, I had to leave because of my time essue, but that would be sometinhg i would enjoy doing for a living.
Igor's suggestions:
I would advise you to correct the words: courses, English, I'm, unfortunately, issue, something. Apart from that, I'd rather have you using a less colloquial style while writing the biodata, as well as writing a little bit more. The sentence "I'm always running(...)" should be revised. The word choice of "professionally" should be a matter of rethought too.
Second Draft:
My name is Giselle Mara Teixeira Reis, I´m 23 years old and I´m an undergraduate student of Law school at FUMEC, and I also study Languages at UFMG, majoring in English teaching. Well, it´s not easy to study these courses together.It gets crazy sometimes when the tests time comes, so I have to skip a law class to study for a English test or the other way around. I wished the day had 26 hours a day, so I could dedicate more on my studies. But i can't complain, because I simply love doing what I do! The down side to that all is that I´m still not sure of what I want to do for a living. My family advise me to get into public contest, but my heart says differently. To pursue a legal career through public contest is not for anyone. You have to love it in order to achieve something. But that's not how I feel about Law school. Is very interesting an open minding, but that's all for me. I had an English teaching experience at Cultura Inglesa which made me fall in love for teaching. I taught kids from 7 to 10 years old and it was amazing to see how fast and effortless they learned! As much as I loved teaching there, I had to leave because of my time issue. I intend to graduate in Law school by the end of this year, so that I can fully dedicate my time to study English. I hope that by that time I'll know for sure what to do with my career.
Giselle, please write the final version of the text and upload an appropriate photo.
Igor's suggestions:
I would advise you to correct the words: courses, English, I'm, unfortunately, issue, something. Apart from that, I'd rather have you using a less colloquial style while writing the biodata, as well as writing a little bit more. The sentence "I'm always running(...)" should be revised. The word choice of "professionally" should be a matter of rethought too.
Second Draft:
My name is Giselle Mara Teixeira Reis, I´m 23 years old and I´m an undergraduate student of Law school at FUMEC, and I also study Languages at UFMG, majoring in English teaching. Well, it´s not easy to study these courses together. It gets crazy sometimes when the tests time comes, so I have to skip a law class to study for a English test or the other way around. I wished the day had 26 hours a day, so I could dedicate more on my studies. But i can't complain, because I simply love doing what I do! The down side to that all is that I´m still not sure of what I want to do for a living. My family advise me to get into public contest, but my heart says differently. To pursue a legal career through public contest is not for anyone. You have to love it in order to achieve something. But that's not how I feel about Law school. Is very interesting an open minding, but that's all for me. I had an English teaching experience at Cultura Inglesa which made me fall in love for teaching. I taught kids from 7 to 10 years old and it was amazing to see how fast and effortless they learned! As much as I loved teaching there, I had to leave because of my time issue. I intend to graduate in Law school by the end of this year, so that I can fully dedicate my time to study English. I hope that by that time I'll know for sure what to do with my career.
Giselle, please write the final version of the text and upload an appropriate photo.